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Writing Update and why Window key + H is amazing – 11/05/2025

You only need to break two metacarpals to get wildly sidetracked from writing and other creative pursuits which is why I haven’t updated the website in a while. That and I am in the process of buying a house, which is going well, but all in all it has taken away time and energy. But mostly its the hand.

And while in the grand scheme of things its not a major injury, it has been debilitating. The short version of what happened; it turns out security doors are harder that my bones. Especially if one slams on your hand when you aren’t looking. I was not amused.

Please enjoy this x-ray and the associated distress.

What has this experience taught me?

Life will happen, accidents will happen, and you will have to adapt.

For work and for my personal writing I had to change, amend, or outright write off deadlines and goals that were unattainable. This sucked the motivation right out. I had finally established a strong writing routine, consistently producing around 500+ words daily, and over night it was gone. So I adapted and found new tools to help me.

It is inevitable, that something like it will happen to you, so take it as an opportunity to reorient yourself and try different ways of doing things. For me, I settled into a routine of reviewing, revising and working on the world building for the novel. That latter one is just reading a lot. I recommend it.

The other thing I discovered that allowed me to continue working professionally and on my writing was the speech-to-text option in Windows 11. It is an accessibility that allows you to dictate directly through your device microphone and the tool will transcribe it word for word.

Use the Window key + H to access the tool. Read more here.

My personal use case is for email and light writing, but like most things its not perfect.

Its awkward to use

To be clear, this is not like using Alexa or Siri. You are essentially talking to yourself and there is no fancy filter to fix your mishaps. In the beginning it will feel weird. You will mumble, stutter, say the wrong word, etc. but once you get used to it, it will be fine.

Consider what you want to write first, then speak slowly and clearly, enunciating every word fully. Don’t be alarmed if what is appearing on the screen is incorrect. Finish it first, then fix any mistakes.

You need editing

While impressive, its not perfect. If you’re not a native speaker, or have a tendency to mumble, or even speak too fast, it will have trouble recognizing what you say. Grammar is also finicky, but you can disable automatic-punctuation depending on your preference.

Just get the basics down and edit it.

It wont work public

Ignoring the social aspects of speaking to yourself in public, the tool doesn’t work well in noisy environments. As of writing this, its not capable of separating out your voice pattern from others.

At work I had the pleasure of accidentally transcribing most of what my colleagues said, which was hilarious to read, but made it unusable.

And lastly, a quick aside on the novel.

As of right now, I am back to my writing schedule, which remains the same 250 new words every day until the first draft is done. Right now, the novel has hit 47.700 words, which is about 2/3 of the way towards my end goal. I hope to have the first draft finished by the end of summer, so stay tuned if you want to keep up.

Stay safe and don’t break anything!

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Writing Exercise – Outlining and Plotting 19.09.2024

Been attempting some outlining exercises in another project idea this week. I came across the idea that there are two types of writers (though I forget where I found it). There a plotters and pantsers.

Plotters plan out their work in detail to know what they are doing and where they are going in as much detail as possible.

Pantsers basically go wherever their writing takes them. They will probably have a good idea of what the outcome should be, but are not perturbed by the idea of deviating.

I always thought of myself as the latter, but if honesty needs to prevail, I would benefit a lot more from the former. Most book projects I have worked on in the past 20 years have died in first 50 pages. Some not even breaking the 10 or even 5 page mark. Several science fiction and fantasy concepts, a noir crime novel, a cookbook, and many many others have come and gone.

And its not for a lack of ambition or creativity, I have that in spades. What I seem to lack is direction and an endpoint, that is what has screwed me time and time again. And I could just be a bad writer, that could also be true.

But this is what this writing thing is all about for me. To figure out if I can write a book, if yes, what I can write, and can I complete it. Publishing it feels like a lark should it ever come to that.

A lot of the reason that I think that I want to write is the idea that “writing” is something fundamental to the human experience. It’s “something you do” as a person. Growing up more or less camped out at the local library and taking weekly, if not daily, trips to exchange my loans for something new, was central. It was something I did with having to have friends involved or even parents. The lack of supervision probably added to the experience. I could choose to read whatever I wanted. So I did. And it ignited something in me. And I hope to brighten it more now.

Just to finish off this post. This week I outlined a 2000 word idea for an adventure novel. Just to see if I could. And you know what? It was exciting and invigorating for me as a creative. Maybe I will do another one next week.

Thank you for reading this short post. If you want to follow my journey, do click the follow button and I will try to keep you updated when I can. Aiming for every 2 weeks or so. Have a great day!

Book Project Update #6 – Working in Bursts

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: 12091 words

Goal for next Monday: Another 3000 new words!

20131125_205838_Richtone(HDR)So… That worked pretty well. I actually managed to add the promised 3000 words to the book. Alas, I must disappoint you since I will refrain from sharing any finished work, simply because its not finished. Its the first version of the first draft. Getting from draft to an actual product is going to be interesting. The most likely outcome would be a quick giggle at my expense due to lack of proper (refined/finished) grammar and a confused narrative. Giggles my well-shaped posterior.

It was refreshing (and surprising) that I managed to actually get 3000 words on the page this week, five hundred of which were generated while waiting for my flight out of Stansted. While I have been in worse airports, Stansted is notoriously boring. After visiting the whiskey store and annoying the Super car Salesperson, who seems to think that “wanting to make all my friends jealous by winning a Super-car” was a prospect worth pursuing, there really is nothing to do. Unless you like shopping and eating crappy food. So its a good environment to focus on some writing and brainstorming.

So the conclusion this week: I do my best work in short controlled bursts.

And tagged on to that: Inspiration comes from the strangest of places. Like my wall pictured above. Oh, and London probably helped.

Until next week….

Oh…

And I changed the structure/format. The narrative is much more plastic now.

Cheers!

Book Project Update #5 – Killing Darlings

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: 8701 words

Goal for next Monday: 3000 new words plus more structure, structure and structure!

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Slumped over dead!

The past two weeks were tough, just look how I am slumped over. The narrative took over my brain and the tone was set for a stronger and more engaging plot. As words appeared on screen and notes were taken, the story was pruned for unnecessary b-plots, erroneous ideas and stale characters. Today we mourn the loss of Mary and Molly (their fictional identities are being withheld for the sake of their non-existing loved ones), two characters that were conceived as opposites of personality, origins and intent. Two characters that should have seen both sides of the conflict, seen the fear and joy of winning and losing the fight from so divergent perspectives, that their stories could have filled their own separate books. But the narrative has taken Joshua and his colleague to places I didn’t expect, so for the sake of the story, Molly and Mary have to go.

I have conceded to myself that the issue probably lies less with the ability of the characters and more with my lack of skill writing a convincing female character and complicated plots. Currently my protagonists are (dimwitted) males, an old mean hag, and a dog (it’s a very good dog, mind you). I’m pretty sure I have the dog and the males down, and the hag is just a hag. An old bitter woman assigned to a job or task, that she fulfills to satisfaction but doesn’t really like. Not central in the way that Mary could have been. For now she and Molly have been placed in the “Potential” bag of ideas.

I have also taken to use Evernote extensively for on-the-fly research. For anyone with a smartphone/computer, it makes it simple to quickly create a notebook for your project and organize your notes, links, pics, research, not-entirely-thought-out plots and ideas. Just a thought!

Next week I might post an excerpt from my opening scene. In any case there will definitely be an update of a fascinating and engaging variety.

Book Project Update #2.5 (The non-update)

Not mine, but love XKCD

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: Nothing new. I’m sick!

Goal for next Monday: Complete overview of plot treads and 2000 new words.

So the fact is; I haven’t been writing. I was struck down Wednesday with a stomach bug which somewhat dominated my time. It’s not an acceptable excuse, but nothing to do about that now. But I haven’t been idle. I have been thinking (I know, its hard work. Love it!) about my characters and the relationship between the character and writer. Boiling it right down to basics, then any character you write is ultimately a mirror to how the writer thinks his or her character should/would/can/ought to interact with the world.

It’s a problematic process and can stump even the best of content creators. You can be an excellent orator in other ways, but once you take up the viewpoint of a fictitious entity the flow of creativity can dry up in no time like the crust of cheap store bought pizza. How should you write new and exciting content, keep you characters real and engaging, while still conveying a complete narrative? Take the situations below?

  • How does Romeo react to facing down a fairly miffed fairy while climbing to meet his Juliet?
  • How will Waldo react when he is finally found by Homeland Security and accused of being subversive to American society?
  • What should Darth Vader say, when Luke offers him cookies to join the Light side?

So, here is how I see it: 

Dave (one on my characters) is a canvas for me to paint a production on, he is an empty vessel to be filled with meaning and agency, or he could be a subject to be explored. What Dave is not, however, is real. Down the line, after I’ve taken him to hell (or heaven) and back, added scars to his soul and patina to his personality, he will feel real. But he will never be real. He is an expression of some other bit of me (and the people I base him on, which would still my interpretation of them). And regardless of how much care I put will be putting into making him, he is still faking it. He is still just a projection after all. He does not represent me (since he could be a horrifying racist and misogynist, which I am not), but does emulate my thoughts.

To make it worse, a writer wants to be original. To create something fresh and new and vibrant with awesomeness. Pheeew! Its no wonder the pressure is on to perform, even if what you write is only ever read by your mother. And is there a nifty little piece of advice to fix this? A net little trick  that let you delve into the souls of your characters?

Put succinctly: No. 

Put less succinctly: Hell No.

The character is in your head. The only way to get to get it out  is to work with it. If this is writing up a character sheet and rolling for stats, then do that. If its writing a long back story with tons of little details that explain every little creepy character detail, then do that. If its going for  walk and think, then do that. But in the end, it comes back to the story.

And that needs to be written.

By you.

Further reading:

John Scalzi puts an interesting spin on it in his Star Trek parody RedshirtsNot only is it hilarious. Its also thought provoking and essentially revamped my approach to character development. Whether I’m justified in claiming that is up to you, but to me it worked.

Book Project Update #2

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: 5443 (less than expected) + 845 world notes + 3 character sheets

Goal for next Monday: Complete overview of plot treads and 2000 new words.

20131014_084418Writing sharpens the mind. It makes you curious, hungry for knowledge and ideas, for plot twists and tropes. It makes you consume content like a ravenous beast, not to steal or plagiarize, but to get inspired and engage with new ideas. So writing time gets expanded to include reading time, which becomes reading and watching time, which becomes reading, watching and note taking time, which become writing time once again. Its a peculiar cycling and recycling of content that gets digested by your brainz and then distilled by pen and keyboard to the page. And so the story grows, gains character and matures. Like wine. Or, in my case, maybe more like cheese.

I decided to work more on world building and structuring the story itself. It wonderful to have 10 different and exciting set pieces with action, drama and potential, but no actual link. So structure it is.  So I’ve create the storyboard wall here at home. Hopefully that will become a lot more populated with post it’s, lists and look like some horrifying combination of a mine-laded mind map, a post-it note graveyard and a wall. At least somewhere behind it all.

So, to sum up: Added 800+ words, giving shape to characters (and named them), created world documentation and create a post-it note graveyard on a living room wall. Cheer, and a new update in a weeks time.

Book Project Update #1

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: 4745 (woefully less than expected).

Goal for next Monday: 2000 new words.

Working on a book has taught me two things so far (not counting how fascinatingly creative I can be when it comes to procrastination):

  • One: Research is key to building a strong, well crafted narrative.
  • Two: Research is a pandora’s box that should be managed with utmost care.

This didn’t actually occur to me when I initially started writing, but should have been the first thing on my to-do list. Merry as f… I took flight and wrote my opening chapter, added a ton of headlines for individual chapter ideas and notes on everything from how the world works, political ideals, jokes (need more of those), oddball words like “Muffin” with no added context and phrases like “It should be like that thing with that guy” with no actual idea of how to use it. And then I took a well-deserved break.

And after that initial burst of creativity (and a day or two of reality snapping at it) I come back to it and realize that its filled with inconsistencies, phrases that retrospectively don’t make sense, characters that need fleshing out, etc. So that is what I been doing. I started looking into every aspect of my characters and the story, started reading up on runes, on naming conventions for the area (it will probably be set in Ireland), religious practices and certain historical events, that may be incorporated. And this took up almost all the time I set aside for writing.

The solution (and this is probably not the clever approach), is probably to continue writing and then revamp, revamp and revamp some more at a later stage as more research is done. I’m still in the first draft, so anything is game. Except the names of my characters. At least something is set in stone. For now.

So, to sum up: 

I have an additional 500 ish words, 3 character sheets about each of my main characters, a ton of open tabs in my browser waiting to be read and whole lot of writing to go. On a positive note though, I am having a ton of fun with this thing. Will update you more next week.

Book Project Announcement: “Dave’s Hammer”

Yes, I realized today that I haven’t posted to this blog for a full six months and, to be fair, I have not been too busy. I could have posted maybe once a month and maybe those post would have contained some smidgen of genius (or rot considering the source), but no. Work, freelancing, running (a lot of running) and desperately pursuing other fascinating projects, left me with little energy to keep my creative writing up. Time, yes. Energy, no.

So what to do about it now?

daves_hammerLet’s use the blog for something else. Maybe I should blog about the world or post more shorts, but for now it will serve as my “I Am Writing” outlet. So here is the announcement, official and everything, of my new writing project. I call it “Dave’s Hammer”.

“Dave’s Hammer” is my first real attempt (because I made it official here) at writing a full length novel with the first draft finish some time before Christmas Eve. Its an ambitious deadline, but since its a first draft and I will be using the Nanowrimo month as motivation to work on it, I feel it an appropriate time frame.

A here comes the promise: 

To keep myself accountable and motivated, I will post here every Monday about my progress (or lack of it), what obstacles I’m facing, what challenges I feel overwhelmed by and maybe post a snippet or two of actual finished text here. I solemnly swear to work hard and kick ass, not loose my place too often and to not give up until the thing is done. Even it takes me well into next year.

Lets us begin then:

Working Title: Dave’s Hammer.

Current Word Count: 4013 (hopefully more by bedtime).

Goal for next Monday: 5000 new words.

Wish me luck, an infusion of pure creative genius, lots of coffee and an attitude of sheer bloody mindedness. Couldn’t hurt!